WALT- show not tell by writing detail. Have I made you feel that this giant is fearesome? What are the best parts I have done?
Titanus
The Titanus is a terrifying giant that isn’t quite made of skin and bones and flesh and all that. It is a giant with a house as his torso towers for arms, his legs were long thick towers and his head was a little office to work on maps and journals.
He has elves living in him as if he was a portable base. Elves also lived in his house torso.
The elves would plan where to strike next.
If the elves were under attack in Titanus, he had crossbows on his tower shoulders and he could punch and crush them.
His eyes glowed orange with a lantern in the office.
His mouth was a storage spot for plants and foods.
And sometimes a prison for traitors.
He would always appear in elf villages transporting and getting troops.
There are multiple types depending what region you’re in.